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TheOutreachEmailThatGetsReplies

Reply rate is not a copywriting problem. It is a targeting problem wearing a copywriting costume — but the copy still has to not be terrible.

I get asked for my outreach template roughly once a week. I do not have one, and the reason is not that I am guarding it — it is that a template is an answer to the wrong question.

Reply rate is overwhelmingly determined before a single word is written. If the list is right, a mediocre email gets replies. If the list is wrong, the best email in the world gets ignored by someone who was never going to publish you.

The part that is targeting

Across the last twelve months, the single strongest predictor of a reply was whether the site had published a contributor piece in the previous sixty days. Not domain rating, not traffic, not whether they had a write-for-us page. Recency of actually doing the thing.

The part that is copy

Given a correct list, the email has one job: prove in the first two lines that a person read the site. Everything else is negotiable.

  • Reference a specific piece and say something about it. Not "I loved your post on X". Something that could only be said by someone who reached the end of it.
  • Lead with the angle, not with yourself. The editor's problem is next week's slot, not your credentials.
  • One idea, not three. Offering a menu reads as having no conviction about any item on it.
  • No attachments and no links to a portfolio. Both trip filters and neither gets opened at this stage.
  • Say what you want in plain words. Coyness about wanting a link reads worse than the ask itself.

The subject line is not where the leverage is. The list is where the leverage is.

On follow-ups

One follow-up, seven to nine days later, adds meaningfully to reply rate. The second adds almost nothing. The third actively costs you — it converts a neutral non-response into a decision to never publish you, which is a strictly worse position than silence.

I send one. If that goes nowhere the site returns to the pool and gets approached again in six months with a genuinely different angle, which is a much better use of the relationship than grinding the same pitch.